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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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07/10/15
Really enjoyed this well written piece.

God bless~
I loved so many things about your piece - the clever way you wove a powerful message into your story, the gorgeous descriptions, the characters and how they interacted. This has to be one of my favourites this week. Awesome piece!
07/11/15
Your descriptions are superb. I especially like 'freeze like spit on a sidewalk.' This well written piece drew me right into the action and the last line rounded it off perfectly. Great job!
From "Amazing Grace" to "A Mansion over the Hilltop," I love this story. The family life is so typical--memory evoking of arguing with siblings in the back seat on my own vacations, the "I know where I'm going" from Dad to the sure knowledge of Mom--and the mischief of the children. The best part is sharing the guilt with the MC. You nailed it for a gem of a story.
07/16/15
Congratulations!

God bless~
07/17/15
Congratulations, Beth, on your EC. I loved your story and could picture you and your brother creeping around that house and then racing through the barbed wire fence. I wonder what was making that scary noise!