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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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07/16/15
Wow===that was an incredibly entertaining story. I hope it gets the attention of the judges as it certainly grabbed mine from beginning to end!

Nicely done and completely on topic!


God Bless~
I really liked your article.

You developed your characters well. They made sense for their situations. I especially liked the mother's no-nonsense attitude, but then you showed her soft spot for her child when she bought the licorice (hope I spelled that correctly).

Well done and God bless!
07/17/15
An absolutely delightful read! Right on topic, interesting characters, and the element of surprise I love in anything I read. Excellent piece of creative writing.
07/21/15
I loved the many little details you used to structure this captivating tale. I was wondering if you'd forgotten the topic but the last line showed me how well crafted your story was. Great job.
What a fabulous twist, and take on the topic. Had me going until the end.
07/22/15
Well done! What a delightful style you have! And the twist at the end was wonderful:)
A scrumptious tale about a sweet little gal. I enjoyed this immensely!