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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/15
Great writing! A mystery - most enjoyable.
08/27/15
Wow! This one really loads the suspense and curiosity, but at the end you gave me the chance to ketchup with you.
Great descriptive work.
08/27/15
WOW! This is so clever! I was beginning to get shivers down my spine at one point. That mysterious grey eyed lady was freaking me out, but your ending was absolutely brilliant. Congratulations on your EC win. Well worthy.
08/28/15
Oh wow! Very mysterious! I want to know what it all means. Who was that lady?
Congratulations, Bethy. (and it wasn't even a poem)
08/28/15
What a creative idea for the topic! I love the combination of mystery and humor. Great writing!
Congratulations for you EC for a wonderfully mysterious story! I enjoyed it.
08/28/15
Congratulations, Beth. A well deserved EC for this.
08/29/15
Mystery adventures are my favorite genre so thanks for your enticing piece!

Superb ending to cleverly written tale.
09/03/15
Congrats!
God bless~