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I liked the way you've used the topic, especially in conveying a subtle message about judging people. I loved the interaction between the two characters. Great piece!
10/28/15
Very realistic. Well done.
10/29/15
I am drawn to conversation driven characterization and I love this little slice of life story. It feels like part of a longer work, so maybe this will end up in a manuscript some day? Very clever.
Congratulations on ranking 13th overall! Happy Dance!