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04/21/16
Wow! This was great, I loved it...and to read it was a true story made it come together even more.

I "bet" this scores high with the judges.

Nicely done!

Blessings~
04/22/16
Oh,no! Caught ticket-handed!
I lived a few houses away from a major highway. Each weekend, nighttime traffic was heavy as horse racing fans returned from harness races.

Wing His Words
The opening line is absolutely brilliant! I love the idea of parents tempting us and I had to read more. You put me right there at the races and the ending was a hit. The fact that it is true makes it an even more valuable lesson.
04/28/16
Dannie,

This was fantastic! So glad to see you in the winner circle with a worthy EC!

Congratulations!


Blessings~
04/28/16
Dannie,

This was fantastic! So glad to see you in the winner circle with a worthy EC!

Congratulations!


Blessings~
Congratulations! Happy Dance!
04/28/16
Congratulations on your 'favorable finish!'

Wing His Words
05/01/16
Congratulations, Dannie, on your 5th place finish. This was a captivating story.

I might delete the first sentence because it gave away the ending.
05/01/16
A true story????
I wouldn't bet on it!!!
But seriously well-written and totally credible. And well done for your HC...
05/15/16
Ha - your title did your precocious piece justice. Well done.