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11/10/17
Well done,
Blessings~
11/11/17
The old adage, "You can't judge a book by its cover," is still true today.

I'm glad Bear was placed in the MC's life at just the right time.
I like the concrete pictures you paint throughout the story.
I'm just a bit confused over the motivation of Bear to first be left alone and then to meet the MC
But great story on having a friend at an opportune time.
Congratulations on ranking 15 overall. Happy Dance!