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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/19
I love your comparisons. Great idea!
Sounds like Steve is a shopaholic! This was a fun read, and quite the shopping extremes.
I like that you had the husband doing the shopping. We need more of that. This is well written and entertaining.
01/11/19
Enjoyed your entire piece, thank you for sharing!

God bless~
Your story was very creative, entertaining, and flowed well. However, I was distracted by the crafting; a misspelled word (taught/taut), a few run-on sentences, and inconsistent spacing. I understand how easy it is to read one’s own writing and miss seeing the errors. More proofreading will improve your writing skills. Keep at it. Good job and a good story.
I enjoyed the juxtaposition of both stories. It made me smile. Since it's really hard for me to get out of the house, my husband does the shopping for me. We used to text back and forth too, but now there's an app for shopping lists. I think you have a great subtle sense of humor. You nailed the topic. Congratulations on ranking 11th overall. Happy Dance!