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Your story flowed well and held my interest. However, the story line was typical for “All Talk, No Action”, so not too creative. I felt let down in the last paragraph. It lacked the same detail and emotion expressed in the rest of the story.

It’s a sad commentary on divorce and broken families when this story is considered typical.

This piece is well written for the most part. Good work.
01/19/19
So many sad little kids in the world because of broken promises. Heartbreaking.
I knew from the start where this story was going-very predictable, but interesting. I liked the feel of dialog and emotions.
01/21/19
Great message in this well written story.
I loved your message!
God Bless~
01/24/19
So sad, but so frequent a scenario; which you have animated so clearly and painfully with powerful insights into Sarah's thinking.
As an earlier review says, your plot was predictable, but I still found it well-worth the read.
01/24/19
Great job Francie. Very touching and creative. I felt God's compassion in my heart as I was reading. His heart always breaks before ours does.
01/26/19
Sad 'n sweet. Poignant and pointed. Well written.