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This is a lovely poem. I will admit, I tend to wear interesting shoes, but they are great conversation starters, and once we start conversing, it's just another step to sharing the Word. You did a nice job. The words flowed easily and the message is great.
This was a fun read!
I enjoyed reading this very much. The beginning made me think about how many women seem obsessed with shoes. Then you brought the focus to what is most important, the Good News. One suggestion. Since the title is Your Shoes,I think the last stanza needs a reference to shoes instead of feet to tie it all together.
01/27/19
I love poems like this...simple, yet fun to read! You managed to put a special emphasis on witnessing for Christ amidst a pleasant rhyming presentation. Well done!