Notice: Undefined index: KT_UserID in /var/www/vhosts/faithwriters.com/subdomains/transition/httpdocs/wc-article-level4-previous.php on line 32
The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 146 times

Notice: Undefined variable: comments in /var/www/vhosts/faithwriters.com/subdomains/transition/httpdocs/wc-article-level4-previous.php on line 213
Member Comments
Member
Date
02/08/19
Interesting read. The names of the demons were creative. This reminded me of This Present Darkness, one of my favorites.
02/08/19
Points for creativity, for sure. Solid workman prose, straight-forward, nothing fancy. The YA crowd would probably really dig it. Keep it up!
Clever take on the topic. I like it.
This is an intriguing story. I could see this being expanded into a fantasy novel. You do a nice job of developing the demons. The message is powerful too.
It felt like I was reading a Frank Perretti story! Well done!
02/13/19
This made me think of Screwtape. Well written.
02/14/19
Powerful story, well done,
God bless~
02/14/19
Powerful story, well done,
God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 13 overall. Happy Dance!