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Cute story. The name Butch is perfect for the bully. I love your analogies.
02/28/20
Well written entry with a powerful close.
Blessings~
You did a lovely job on a difficult topic. It is good to be reminded to give a smile, to acknowledge their presence, to reach out in love. Thank you for giving those two the pleasure of your friendship.
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You did a nice job of painting a picture and showing Jimmy's emotions. Be careful of POV shifts. Your ending is wrapped up nicely, has a great message and the story was on topic.