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03/06/20
I love biblical fiction, and how
you've breathed fresh insight and a great message into an isolated event; and brought it to life beautifully. However, your title is slightly inaccurate, because Jesus noticed the widow's sacrificial gift. If I were judging, I'd put it right up there!
You made the little story come to life. Well done!
03/09/20
Good story. I suggest you fix this: 'It was Matthew, her husband, John’s best friend.' I stumbled here, thinking Matthew was the husband and kept wondering why John's death affected the family's circumstances as described. Funny how one comma can make such a difference.
Oh this was outstanding. I found myself hanging onto every word. I thought it genius to have the twist ending. I'm usually pretty good at spotting them, but this one delighted me. The message is so potent and still timely today as it was 2000 years ago. Outstanding out of the box, yet spot on topic job with this powerful piece.