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Definitely a miracle! Great story.
You did a nice job of using the topic. I've heard so many stories where just a split second makes all the difference. It's curious how many times these miracles happen and we have no clue that misplacing our keys and looking for them for a minute may have prevented something horrible. I had a bit of a hard time following the story. Make sure your transitions are smoother and be aware of POV shifts. Your story definitely made me stop and think, especially with everything going crazy in the world right now. You had a great message too and I enjoyed your subtle humor.