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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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04/09/20
Beautiful!
So poignant. I'd never heard of the culture before. You did well foretelling, so that the ending was not a shock. Yet, I had tears. Well done!
This is a powerful story. It left me with a lump in my throat. It also made me curious about the Hutterians, which I looked up and learned more about. This is spot on topic and carries a beautiful message.
04/13/20
Beautifully written. Such a poignant story crafted masterfully.
04/14/20
This is beautiful. Very well done. One editing comment. Third paragraph. “New” should be “knew”. For when you submit it somewhere.
04/16/20
Well done, content, topic, delivery.
Blessings~
04/16/20
Wow. Just wow. This is an amazing piece. Thank you so much for writing it and sharing it with us all.
Beautifully written story--It touched my heart and obviously the judges!
04/16/20
Congrats!
Blessings~
05/08/20
Beautifully written. The story brought tears to my eyes.