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The FaithWriters Writing Challenge and contest for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge
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Member Comments
Betrayal is hard especially at the hands of people you trusted. I thought you did a good job of weaving the topic throughout your story.

The only thing I would change is the echo of the words, "revving engine".
This is a great story. It's full of conflict and suspense and ends with a beautiful picture of hope.
Congratulations on ranking 13th overall. Happy Dance!